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step by step, reflective in oscillations

like a pendulum
I fall in and out of love
in and out of a door.
walking a jouney
not knowing where I am going
only knowing it will lead to an end

the first step hurt the most
waklingon broken glass
expecting my feet to not bleed.
my steps are still young
and the glass is stuck
making shoes out of pain
one day I will be callous.

but I still look on, watching as the horizon is ablaze
calling me on in its gentle ways
knowing when it is gone
I'm never alone.
©2004-2009 ~the-sohi
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i guess its a description of something I need 2 think about

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:iconnolight:
I love how this piece is written and how it concludes. It's beautifuly worded and the imagery is very powerful in your work.

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Even on the road to hell, flowers can make you smile.

Raising teenagers is like trying to nail jello to a tree
:iconthe-sohi:
:) thanks

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:meditate:
i ask of life,
not to be part of something, but to be part for something.
:iconlavatera:
ive always wanted to walk on glass...ahem... awsome piece! lovin the imagery
:iconhblayne11:
very awesome "wakling on broken glass
expecting my feet to not bleed" i love that!
:icontborge:
Strong. Strong piece you have here man. This might make you poet of the year you know. :w00t: Honestly, it moved me so this only means one thing... :+fav:

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:iconthe-sohi:
^_^ thankies! :hug: glad you liked it!

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:meditate:
i ask of life,
not to be part of something, but to be part for something.
:iconthe-sohi:
aww thanks man, O_o poet of the year? :rofl: lol i dont think so.

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:meditate:
i ask of life,
not to be part of something, but to be part for something.
:iconthe-sohi:
:ninja: umm ok then.

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:meditate:
i ask of life,
not to be part of something, but to be part for something.
:iconijo:
i like pendulums and i like this poem

6/10 Ninjas
:ninja::ninja::ninja::ninja::ninja::ninja:

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